DrawnOut The End

In DrawnOut, Jace is a nerd who dressed as his own comic OC for Halloween. During Halloween night a man in a black robe gives him a potion and tell him to drink it. Instead, that night it falls onto his comic pages, and a monster bursts out, swallowing him up.

He awakens in a world of his comic and it's characters which are any of his fucking lame OC's. The main guy he meets is his actual OC with the red hat, Drawn. Once he touches his hand he recognizes him as the "artist" who invented them all, and intends to keep him safe from every danger, and from other people knowing.

He gets him a new outfit from Raden's Threads, a joke on RadenWA, the artist who draws lots of boots, he did the costume design for Jace in the comic. And Keith, Raden's own OC is the character that gives it to him. But then, the guy with the cloak shows up on a Dragon which breathes fire and then vores Jace.

Inside, Jace sees something glowing, and get horked up holding a cute little fire spirit. Basically, there are 4 spirits in the world: Fire, Water, Earth, and Wind.

THEN THE FIRE NATION ATTACKED!

Sorry, just a joke... anyway...

The black cloaked guy returns to his evil mountain, blocked off by a door with each spirit on it. To go confront him they needed to collect every spirit from each part of the world.

So, where I left off is the fact that they were going to a jail to pick up one last member. Which was gonna be Cripes, the cute little bear racoon character I draw into The Costume Shop frequently.

He was gonna be Jace's first drawing as a kid. And Cripes CHOSE to stay in the jail to be safe from all the scary monsters and shit. Jace says he had no idea he would still exist and be living like this, so he says he'll take care of him. So they would venture out into the world, with random perils befalling them trying to get each spirit.

We also saw that the Black cloaked dude looked exactly like Jace, but pale skinned and black haired. We'll get to that.

Anyways, we get Jace and Drawn sinking in Quicksand at one point, and Cripes is just sitting there with his eyes apart. They call for help. And Cripes' eyes SLOWLLLLY come together, he frowns, and then pulls out a massive sword and attacks every mud monster saving them. Then goes back to looking cute and boss-eyed.

So, They collect the spirits, and go to the mountain to stop the black cloaked guy. The end of the comic would be the black cloaked guy being Jace's 'Superego', the part of his brain that should be operating as moral conscience, stating that Drawn as his kinky OC is his 'Id' that has gotten more freedom in the kinky world.

His superego's plan was to manifest itself in the real world, have Jace drink the potion, and then take over his body to make more respectable choices. But instead it fell onto his comics, trapping him in this world instead to fight him.

I guess Cripes would have been revealed to be the Ego, the part of his brain that mediates the Superego and Id. In the end the Superego would fall into a vat of the green goo, and just vanish. Jace would take a stargate back to the normal world where he draws the Superego as friends amongst the other characters.

One detail I wanted to do, but ended up abandoning was that because Jace created Drawn with the hat over his eyes, that means Drawn ended up being blind, because he wasn't drawn with eyes. And then Jace would draw him in the dirt that night with eyes. And the next morning Drawn would have his vision for the first time.

I thought that was an emotional idea, but people who are blind don't suddenly get their sight back, so that was kind of inappropriate, and might come across as ableist. Instead I was gonna do that Drawn had no memories because he wasn't written a backstory.

And so Jace would write him one. And that morning he'd be flooded with memories. Anyways, both of those were kinda heavy for what should have been a lighthearted comic.

But I genuinely thought back then that this comic was special and I could pitch it to publishers and stuff. Instead I stopped it, and cranked out 40 pages of The Costume Shop which instantly was more popular, and a more cohesive comic series. So DrawnOut fell by the wayside, but my username has always been drawnout18 everywhere.

So that's that's the end of DrawnOut! It would have been LONG and have lots of dialogue. In fact by re-uploading the pages here, I noticed how much dialogue and explanation there is, and very little action.

There was also very little "kink" but that was before I was comfortable or even good at drawing NSFW content.